So much that I could say or do
to show that I love you
I'd paint the night's sky, white and blue,
Just to brighten up your day,
I'd write a language, letters and words too
Just to express what my heart has to say,
I love you, more than the words that I speak,
I love you, more than the letters that i seek,
I love you, beyond what you could ever conceive
Coils of fragrant love, jasmines strewn into a weave
I love you, more than you would ever believe.
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5 comments:
Lovely ! Oh words words...the only asset of man. = (
-Leaves a paint brush-
I have a question, kind of irrelevant to the poem here. But I'll ask it here anyway .
What do you think of being in love with someone who is not good to you who does not treat you well yet you'd die for them (not you as in Moe no but you know the question....)?...
i think love should never be one-sided. It is futile to love someone who doesn't love you, if not destructive. Love ought to be somewhat reciprocal for it to mature and reach its fruition.
if they love you but fail to meet your expectations; not treating you well and not being appreciative or good to you...then its more an issue of communication or understanding.
if they don't desist, then its a question of what you are willing to settle for and endure in the name of love. Personally...i think, life is far too short and meaningful than to be spent loving someone who doesn't love or appreciate you back or someone who doesn't put in an effort to at least rectify their end of the relationship spectrum.
my twoo shillings
I agree...but we see a lot of couples where one side always give in more of themselves into the relationship than the other..Give in more, sacrifice more, try everything possible more...etc..And somehow they both truly love each other...I don't know its confusing...My question was not about one sided love ..but let's say one sided sacrifices?.. if that make sense...
Salam bro, long time, how r u? i hope your well :) your words never cease to bring a smile to my face! this piece was beautiful! even if you wernt in love, you sure would fool us all with such sincere words! keep posting, your so naturally talented, share more often! takecare
Sincerity :)
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